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Old 11-01-05, 07:14 PM   #9
Vaskez
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You cant hit the down beat, so ill hit ya, and beat u down instead
Cuz ur lines only have flow... wen theyve flown right over our heads
^^nice bit of wordplay but punch is not hard really

This dyke is a whore, His best punches are just lines that are forced
This kid's pathetic... 'Like Chess', He'll spends 'knights on the board'!!
^^good attempt at wordplay, but the thing about wordplay is that is has to work both ways. Way 1) he'll spend nights on the board - works. way 2) he'll spend knights on the chess board err spend knights? Meeeeh kiiinda works I suppose but it's pushing it. This isn't too hard either.

Vote Fux

cos they both weren't hard, but Fraud's was more forced

I dunno, maybe I'm being dumb, but unless someone explains how spending knights on a chess board makes sense, the vote stands
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