haha, damn girl you got some flame, but like everybody else said jus work on delivery, get mad at tha mic...really tho.. otha than that...im feelin that shit......the only thing i didnt like was tha siphilis line, kinda old..... but that shit was clean hahaha
u shoulda thru a 2nd verse to it tho or faded the end out
8/10

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