waddup kid
just thought id talk a lil bit about your 1st lil drop
its seems that you have done this type of thing b-4
considering yer ask 4 help with structure
i didnt really see to much structure
but i have to admit i liked the story
wouldve been better if you would break the lines up a bit more and add sum more....well....words
but who am i
i dunno
keep blessin




1