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Old 11-02-05, 08:45 AM   #14
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Voted For: MC Firetruck

MC Firetruck

U never had a bitch, even just a kiss is what you sure hope
Da only Miss Conception here is when I heard u were dope
^first line is a bit simple set-up but the second line finished it off quite nice.
Rather predictable nameplay though but still decent 6/10

Fuck yo, I hate da bullshit, an u'r full of it, friend
U lead that Trigga crew? Well 2 bad u ain't pullin' the win
^First line is bleh, can't give you nothing for that.
Second line is good personal, making use of wordplay to form punch 7/10

Fag, it's obvious u love da cock, that's for sure man
Playin' with enough Hardballs to make Keanu Reeves your fan
^good punch formed with wordplay, first line is again decent build-up.
Nothing too special too, no real personal touch to it 6/10

Get whored, damn, my punches have u bruised and slumped, g
I'll leave u so blackened, George Bush would kick u out tha country
^self-glorifying but funny wordplay in last line 5/10

It's funny, how much you d/r kids so u won't be lonely, bitch
U bit a whole verse from Ysdat...
...then put him on the voting list
^hmmmm, decent but I feel you could've worded it differently so it would hit harder 6/10

Bro quit, u'll never sell, u'r more like "I need fans!"
Only record u got, is most times coming back from ip bans
^hahaha...now this one made me chuckle...nice set-up.
Hardhitting punch with personal feel to it 8/10

You're finished, off this site, fuckin' wannabe vet
But I'm curious...
...which of ur wack ass aliases are we gonna see next?
^aight, good to finish him off in fact. Cool punch 7/10

Total: 45/70 = 64%


Conceptions

You'll Be Trying To Stay On Top Like You Was A Skippin Rock
Sittin On The Stove Was The Only Time Your Shit Was Hot
^hmmm only time your shit was hot-lines are sorta played but they still work.
Not feeling first line though 6/10

I Rip The Top Off MC's So I Just Watch Your Head Fluidz Spill
Im Killin Yo Ass So The Voters Know Who Has The Dead Skillz
^not feeling first, pure self-glorification. Second line is
better though 6/10

When Im Done I'll DJ on Yo Eye So You Can Have Mixed Sight
You Spit Straight "BullDog" So Yo Bark Is Worste Than Yo Bite
^nice wordplay in first line, you continue it in second line
and finish it off with nice punch 7/10

You've Been 5-2 For The Longest You Havent Made a Change
We Can See That Yo Rhymes Is Stink Like having Must Stains
^could've worded it differently so it hit harder but still decent 6/10

I Crash You If You Get In My Path Son They Call Me A Bolder
I'll Leave You Shit Out Of Luck Like You Eatin 4 Leaf Clovers
^nice wordplay in second line, first one is bleh though 5/10

See If Punchez Were Bombs Firetruck Would Never Detinate
Like a Broken Escolator Everyone Knows You Cant Elevate
^escalator line is played as hell but the first line is good 6/10

You Know You Dont Have To Show...The Battle Is Optional
You'd Have a Better Chance Of Dissin Me..If You Dropped a Topical
^haha lmao...this one made me chuckle, nice way to close it 7/10

Total: 43/70 = 61%

Close battle right here, both dropped some nice stuff but I expected better in fact.

Flow: Conceptions
Personals: MC Firetruck
Punches: Conceptions
Creativity: MC Firetruck
Vocab: Conceptions
Total score: MC Firetruck
Winner: tie...

Okay so it's a tie...this makes it even harder on me...the total scores are close as well and I must say I enjoyed both. But in the end, my vote goes to MC Firetruck for having more creativity in his verse. I felt like Conceptions had bit too much self-glorification in it and I didn't like reading that. Very close battle, gonna be close call for many voters I think.
No hate to either one of you btw...
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