If wackness was muscle spasms, you'd be more than restless
His drops are Rock bottom and i ain't talkin bout homo wrestlers
-This is dope a real good opener. Nice punch, good metaphor it hit hard.

Nigga's 22 so why the hell you fuckin with teens? is (he)
So lonely that nigga be scopin the board to find penis?
-This was cool too, not as good as the previous line but still hit hard but lacked on the funny-ness

Your flow's goofy.............my apologies to disney character's
Ill? Nigga's "playin himself" like Jeru tha Damaja
-nice closer. Hard hitting punch again good metaphor, good way to close the battle.

I think you meant ‘dArk’ right? You wont win this, lame.
how he gonna bring his A game when he forgot the A in his name?
-nice, personal punch hit him hard. This was a good way to open ya verse.

You can act like u aint my fan, we’ll be seeing ya frown though
cuz you stay on DL… like heads that do shit on the down low
-nice, good rhyming, hard punch and funny too.

If people want it to be sunny, they’ll give me love
cuz I’ll get rid of Dark faster than the sun usually does
-nice metaphor, hard punch, I liked it. You should be proud of this bar.

Voters could explain about everything u lack bird
but your just getting the L, D…. like my initials backwards
-Very nice! Great way to end your verse, hard punch which im sure will prob win you the battle.

Overall: I think both verses had real quality but one had volume aswell. You both had upto 16 lines and maybe should have used more. I think you have both got more to show. My vote goes to David Lama.


I just realised you need 200 posts to vote. Thats a real shame. Best of luck to both of you tho

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