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Old 11-04-05, 06:17 PM   #13
Triple_N
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yea good/original beat choice......the dubs on ya rhyming words is jus a tad loud.....flow is cool......delivery could be a bit more animated.....I like its laid back style but u coulda did a lil more wit it.......the hook....is diff.....it fits the beat.....the singing in the background would be better if it was a lil more layered sounding....but overall good track..enjoyed it....there is lil things I can knitpick at here an there but if people gotta knitpick to find flaws in the track then u on point..solid song...keep dropping good shit
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