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Old 11-04-05, 09:11 PM   #2
Willa
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whoa not feeling ur intro voice you sound umm young need to get soem bass added to ur vocals
beat idk its really basic not feeling it to be honest too fast for you i think
flow ok not great though you could use improvement here
lyrics pretty basic nothing stood out to be honest with you
presence/emotion actually pretty good here you have a really bad lisp though lol liek one of the worst ive ever heard i think idk some type of speech impediment
overall ok track its hard to understand soemof ur words cause of ir lisp lol but flow was pretty straight and ur presence was there
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