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Old 11-04-05, 11:49 PM   #28
chip
pain is weakness leaving the body
 
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all verses had those kinda kindergarten rhymes...... what i mean by that, iz there wasn't much thought put into the lyrics........ wow @ the heavy English accents on Track 1...... if i had to pick one, i'd say Track 3, but i was also feelin' the femcee on track 1.........
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