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Old 11-05-05, 05:40 PM   #14
Magic5
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Voted For: GKillaz05

GKillaz05

Your rhymes need surgery your purgery is not workin'...
Could give you 10 free shots punches still aint hurtin'...
Didn't connect..
I'll spit first even though you'll try to copy my shit...
Thats why when im done spittin' ima copywrite my spit...
Played as hell..
You could rap featurin Missy and still couldnt work it...
Practice makes perfect Fatal come up short like a circuit...
Not a punch..
Kid head like a computer with a fatal error inside...
Tried flowin' down a slide, and just ran off the side...
Concept had potential.. worded poorly..
Kids terrorfied to go outside, thats why he on the comp...
Stompin' all over you, while you just reak like a swamp...
No way..
Puttin'a red light on ya streak I hold it up like taffic...
Ask Whats whack ya track is, man just stick to graphics...
Concept had potential.. worded wrong..
Smack this herb, thx for the goodluck but Im conceded...
Pothead just proceeded to get the L like he needed it...
Not a punch..
Fatal still not dope... killin' ya breathe like scope...
Scientist study'n ya rap cant see skill unda a microscope...
Concept had potential.. worded wrong..

.Fatal.

Talk shyt, its a wrap cuz da six'll pop ya,
sit back n watch him 'choke' like the 'knickerboccers',
Not a punch..
u aint a killa 'poppa', i chill while u ack hard,
put ya name on ma list, n put a grave in ma backyard,
Not a punch..
go n grab a gun, n tell da neighbors ya paths marked,
u lack smarts , he's a faggot n a fuckin wimp,
Still not a punch..
if g's such a killa, someone tell me why's he duckin mims?,
read him a bed time story before u tuck him in,
The first line had potential.. but worded wrong.. there wasn't a punch..
nigga i buck i win, n ya 'dream is through',
every one of ma 'bars' is 'nuts' like a 'peanut chew',
Concept had potential.. worded wrong..
on a regular basis i'd shock u like a pikachu,
but on dis ossasion i'll just let the nina scream at u,
Not a punch..

This battle was weak. GKillaz had a verse full of concepts that didn't connect. He had a few concepts with potential, but they worded wrong and it killed it. .Fatal.'s verse had one potential concept, but it was in the wrong order, and the rest of his verse didn't even have punches. They worded in a way to where the concept was bombed like no other, and they didn't even come close to connecting. The only reason I'm voting for GKillaz is because even though his punches didn't connect, he at least had punches.

Vote - GKillaz05

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