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Ya mom massages my nuts
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ok..opened wit hook good idea...mixing wasn't bad..had flow to it..........your delivery starts strong..but it falls off a lil at u thru verse...same wit flow opened good but stumbles a bit towards end....ok next verse....opens wit a good....like how u toned deliveyr down when beat dropped...awwwwwwww when it came back u shoulda got hype again.....now it gets repetitve u held it way too long...lyrically u came generic but good..some creativity in there...had sum decent punches.....overall ya improvement really shows......keep it up son........1
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice
Because at the end of the day, you get what you give
So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is
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