Typing as I listen.....beat is ah'ight.......ok ya open ah'ight...lacked any real energy...oh what happens after beat drops?...u lost ya flow man...that fast flow sounded forced...an unnatural....ok back to the slow flow....it would be good if u put sum emotion in it....rhyme scheme was real basic....as was flow....it seemed like u used same scheme jus at diff speeds....if u upped ya energy an flowed more versatile this woulda been ill......but keep elevating....stay up.......1

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