Voted For: Drakel

Premanition

‘Free Bird’ trapped in his barz looking for dead heights
You moving on the path to success with no head lights
Didn't connect..
Poetical? hardly and even that outlook won’t scar~me
……Drakel couldn’t Produce a Hit like Talib Kweli..!!!
Decent..
Bitch you bin wack so long, filling cracks like Thongs
Damn! Some of RV got a taste~in ‘twats’ like tongues
Not a punch..
Drak more frustratin than them calls from sales personel
Like a superscious mind, we’d prefer this taled burden fell
Didn't connect..

Drakel

came up with a catch phrase, too bad its just gay, bitch
trying too hard man ...poo pow just looks like you're pushing shit
No..
you're an udder failure, toast you up, watch your remains spread
no margerine for error here cause you're just butter off dead
Butter and better sound nothing alike, therefore ruining this wordplay and punch attempt..
check out the map of his life, can't help but laugh at every section
there's no way you're a legend, when your future aint even in the right direction
Didn't connect..
so i'm chomping down on this shrimp, kicking his tail to the trash bin
you all will see feud, and me mussle away from his failed ass a win
Not a punch..
no need to get childish, but you're shit is gay, no one ever looks
cause you balou more cock, than a gay version of jungle book
Decent..

Overall, this battle was decent. Premanition's verse was very inconsistent. There was a decent punch in there, and one other one that had potential, but was worded wrong. The rest didn't connect at all. Drakel also had one decent punch, and the rest were either forced or just didn't connect. To me, it came down to which verse I liked better.. and I have to go with Premanition. Even though the opener was completely played, his overall verse just seemed better to me. Drakel's wordplay seemed forced some of the time, and another time it just didn't make sense trying to pass of butter with better. I've seen some instance of all of the lines Drakel used before, and it just wasn't that entertaining to me. So, Premanition gets my vote.

Vote - Premanition

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