listnenin...
like the beat, nothin amazin
rappin starts, bit loud... ur obviously tryin to put a lot of emotion in this but its not really workin
sample comes in, bit 2 quiet but still koo
2nd verse... still 2 loud, basically everythin i sed bout the 1st verse, good lyrics tho
hook sample again, fits good wit the beat, but not wit the verses
3rd verse... same as ur other 2, this wud be really hot if u'd put some emotion into it
again (u did this wit ur put ur hands up song 2) the end is too abrupt, u need to let the beat fade out for a few secs