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Old 11-07-05, 09:26 AM   #4
G Deuce
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Pretty Decent drop, just take that echo off your voice, cause you might run into the problem of it not fitting on most tracks cause it'll drown out your voice. Actually, you had me laughin on a couple of parts, like the "gettin stuck like fat niggas in small chairs" bar. Humorous. Suggestions is that you would want to take risks with your sentence structure. When your delivering metaphors, mcs have the tendency of always sayin "like", try to find other words for substitutions. Overall, decent diss track. Keep elevatin.

8.2/10
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