The Original Half Ass King
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IP:
Voted For: Nick Fletcher
Okay...
I hate voting on long ass battles, but Ima vote anyways to help yall close this shit.
So no bitching.
Nick:
Had a few very hard punches, great concepts that made me laugh, and a wide variety of personals.
Random bars I laughed at:
We all laugh at you retard, I’m a joker so I’ll have ya clowned fast
But ya don’t need to be the butt of my jokes, your already a fucking ass
Yeh, you smelly fucking hobo..ya shit I just need to fucking bin it
..so I’d take out the trash can, if you weren’t sleeping in it.
Whole verse was pretty good. Id say 79/100...Some lines could have been worded better, and maybe you could have got the structure/line lengths a bit more closer together and organized.
Killa:
You also had a nice variety of hard personals, mixed in with good structuring. Medeocre wordplay/concepts. A few were a little played, and the whole quote thing was ok until you were up to 3 of them which was wack. Also, some shit didnt even rhyme...
Random goodness:
In this battle,your lost wit what to do,your left alone just pullin hits,
& i would say "I'ma shit on you!!........but u already seem to be full of it
Stop biting,cuz ur' your line compared to mine,just looked sloppy like butter,
you not only suk at writin your OWN rhymes....but u suck at copying others!!
Ima have to give you about a 67/100. Due to the flaws that I pointed out up above.
Sorry if ya dont like it, and werd up if you do. Im just tryna help yall close this shit like I said. So in my opinion Nick got this, but its up to the final polls. GL boys.
V/Fletch............................................
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