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Old 11-07-05, 04:11 PM   #54
Ryan Hughes
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From: Jerzy
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Voted For: Natural killa

this is a powercut, understand ya never gonna rip it kid
u gettin ur lights knocked out, like the city that you livin in*
^^^good opener wit the Personal
look at ur record, thats 25 newbies and 5 allmost average kids
proof this kid will never bring heat, like a lighterless arsonist
^^^Not really feelin this...kinda played
u not runnin the game, listen as these sick flows beatin ya
why u actin gangsta? u not real player like windows media
^^^Good...i like this not really played cuz he worded it right
i know this next concepts played, but im just spitting facts
that im sonnin this cunt....... so just call me k-trini's dad(trinidad)**
^^^...Naw shit was played...
you will allways be a nobody, im leavin u blatantly dealt
making a new account is the only time he makin a name for himself
^^^Good...i liked this one mixed wit a personal
fuck this battle, we all know that you aint writing
so im ending your time on RV like when u was banned for biting***
^^^Ight closer not really a hard punch

u ain't no "Spiderman" on this web..ya verses get us droozy
cause damn....you packing less "venom" than the 1st 2 movies
^^^Good opener....
get immersed with uzi's..body torn 'n face shifted wit embriodery
'n ya country's like JIVE to me...cos it's all missing a "prodigy"
^^^Nice punch....this was good
u loving "danny daubney",defendin him for 7 pages?,FUCKIN DAMN!
cos that just shows...that you'd go to great lengths just to fuk a man*
^^^Ight personal....
before,u duck 'n ran..'n now ya battle?shit,prewrittens can get bended,son
cos I'ma have you "meating" a loss,odds of you winnin's "tender" none
^^^THis good wordplay....it was creative
sending a gun...straight to ya face..u got nutin to say tonight
herbs beat ya "neon" the floor...but you still ain't "display'n light"
^^^Good punch....
obey or striked...this shit's a mismatch...ur style's too hollow for a fight
only reason ya "Lead-E" is cos u already do all the followin in real life
^^^Nice closer.....wit the personal....

V/Natural killa......this was a good battle both came wit good punchs an personals.....but some of leady's punchs an personals were played an didnt hit hard....work on that....natural u came wit a good verse that had some good punchs an wordplay...it was consistent...you get my vote.......
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