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Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP:
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Originally Posted by It's SPuL!
this is the line I freed:
I ain't got no time, so this is what i'm gonna do/
Gotta do what I gotta do, to get myself thru/
^2 bars right there. wtf?
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The downside for you is that both thos lines were off beat AND off flow. thre's no reason to believe they were "rhymes" at all. What's worse is that ther was MAD time after your portion that you could have been rhyming in over the actual beat instead of which ever oen ou made up as you were going along. It's a alf-assed effort at best and I don't legitimately believe that those were 2 bars worth considering if they're actualy 2 intended bars.
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