wow is the only way i can put this

you had excellent imagery and emotion...best ive seen in a while...even though you wrote for a wrong topic still managed to come wit a ill verse....nice structure and flow..this was an overall top piece...not that long but quite entertaining dawg...keep this shit up....9.9/10...woulda been better if you sticked to the topic I GAVE LOL

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