Personally, even though it is gay sometimes you have to force wordplay in text so that people get it, mainly because a lot of people don't look into a bar to find the wordplay.

EXAMPLE:

Ya got conflicted bars, they good, but they tire me each time I take a peek..
..cuz they are so damn fucking interesting, I can't help but fall asleep.

The only shit you could really see in that is....

Conflicted....saying the bars are good, but they tire me, and you generally get tired when you are bored, so its saying the bars are good, but also boring....hence the confliction....

and then you've got the "help but fall asleep" to go with the tired aspect of the punch......now is that all that you can see in there looking at it ???

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