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Old 11-08-05, 10:31 AM   #11
Vaskez
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No I also get the into-resting/interesting wordplay

but it needs better wording to make it clear. That's what separates a good textcee from a great one - they can both think of concepts and worplay but the dope textcee paints mental pictures in the reader's mind so they can't HELP BUT get the punch and wordplay...knah'mean?
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