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Originally Posted by Vaskez
No I also get the into-resting/interesting wordplay
but it needs better wording to make it clear. That's what separates a good textcee from a great one - they can both think of concepts and worplay but the dope textcee paints mental pictures in the reader's mind so they can't HELP BUT get the punch and wordplay...knah'mean?
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Yeah, it needs better wording, but it was off the top of my head so...meh,
but the fact that you saw the other wordplay means that it works...
however,
half these retarded cocksmiths wouldn't get shit unless I made it like this...
Ya got conflicted bars, they good, but they 'tire' me each time I take a peek..
..cuz they are so damn fucking 'into-resting', I can't help but 'fall asleep'.
the "tire" and "fall asleep" part you could get away with, but I guarantee that about 60% of this league wouldn't see the into-resting/interesting wordplay unless it was forced into their fucking face.