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Power Hungry
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yeah, vocals are too loud.
not enough emotion, flow was on point.
I dont really dig love songs that much.
you need more emotion, its spoilin the track completely
the 2nd verse is a step down flow wise from the 1st verse.
overall, its an aiigh, track
just decrease your vocals, and add emotion, it prolly would've been fire.
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Originally Posted by strobe
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