word
this a pretty decent track
the first thing i noticed is that the delivery is kinda weird
i think if anything, it should be a bit more layed back on this kinda track
you seem like you shoutin a lil too much for this kinda a track..
at least for the first verse

im loving the lyrics, they real str8
the flow is on point, i think i only found like one spot you sort of fell off
emotion wise you coo, jus work on delivery a bit and this would be real solid
but keep the whole angry thing in the 3rd verse, since the lyrics match the delivery there...
so word, overall it was pretty solid...

MAS ON EM!

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