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Old 11-08-05, 10:40 PM   #7
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Originally Posted by Natural killa
That shit was wack.You and decree sucked.You shouldn't be rapping.Just stop.

I'm going to make a petition to stop gay people from rappin.

LMFAO^

anyway
the beat is decent
Tha Q moootherfuuucker
verse is decent, there's nothin bad I can say about it, but I just didnt feel it. the way you rappin or ya style, ionno why.

Decree
verse is aiigh, flow is off and choppy. with some work and practice it will get better. you have to get comfortable ridin beats and breathin. a noticed a Fabolous line in there aswell, and a Jay-z line too. its was all good though. aiigh verse besides the choppiness.

a few minor quality issues but nothin to gripe about. my 2nd time listenin I noticed a Cassidy line aswell too. not said the same, but a cassidy line nonetheless.
overall, its an alright track.
It was wack, but I didnt like it that much either.
s'all good.
the movie clip was straight too.

this feedback is for the RG
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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