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Power Hungry
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IP:
I just heard a loud as POP!
WHOA THERE GO ANOTHER !
Lmfao, lemme start the track over..
ok
I dont know why, but when I seen the title of the song I was expecting a sample from the old song
"no where to run too baby, no where to hide"
that would've been dope
the beat is coo, not somethin I would rap on,
"I leave all you pussy bitches brutally diminished"
stood out. lol, it was dope.
i dont know, its somethin asbout your flow.
it isnt smooth, its not choppy or nothin and you dont rhyme THAT much off beat, you just rap funny.
and some of your lines - ionno - its like, you dont know how to make certain words stand out. its like you put emphasis on the wrong words.
work on that.
overall, this is a slightly decent track.
thats all I can say
this feedback is for the RG
hit up my track diamonds in the rough
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Originally Posted by strobe
If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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