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Old 11-08-05, 11:11 PM   #17
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not really feelin the singin

1st verse
i dont like the..whisperin..
not feelin the 1st verse

2nd verse
better
ugh, I hate to say it, but I think Im becomin an Ike fan :-(
likin the 2nd verse ALOT better than the 1st
delivery was on point

3rd verse
hmm, ok, this made me wonder, you WASNT whisperin in the 1st verse, thats just how you rap, I assume.
not really feelin your voice. but your lyrics is cool.
but its like, even if you had the best lyrics in the world, if someone dont like your voice then its goin bring down their response

overall, it was an ok track. didnt like it too much, except for Ike's verse.
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