|
Power Hungry
|
IP:
the beat is straight
"UNF"
Sound like a young ass white kid
wow, your UK accent is almost non existant, that alone is dope as fuck.
anyway, the chorus.
its straight, maybe you should've rehearsed it a few more times before recordin it
1st verse
I dont know what to say. you rap JUST different, I cant put my finger on it what I dont like about it. its not GARBAGE, but Its somethin about it that I dont feel. lol
2nd verse
I like alot better than the 2nd verse
maybe what you need is better DELIVERY and variation in your damn voice. more emphasis on certain words? more confidence on the mic? I dont know.
overall its an aiigh track
the more you do, the better you will get, I can see you gettin better with more practice.
this feedback is for the RG.
Return the favor on my track
diamond in the rough
__________________
www.myspace.com/zoneout1
Rap Extraordinaire
Quote:
|
Originally Posted by strobe
If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
|
|