where can i start...i def hear slim in ur style...spaghetti...stay away from using food in the beginning of ur flow...middle..shit or end...u word like that for a reminise...not ur brain

..all in all..i couldnt feel the track..didnt know what ur tryin to convey

u started off on track somewhere but strayed...work on the meoldy.

yo im new posting and new to this site all-together...and what ever i say is strickly crtitique..

peace

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