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Old 11-09-05, 10:56 PM   #2
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your verse.
it was aiigh
nice and "poppy" like the song.
your quality though
man, it almost sounds kinda smothered.
so, it may be my speakers or it may be you. most likely its my speakers but its kind of hard to make out what you sayin.
but I can distinguish that you ARE ridin the beat and are flowin well.
I just cant make out what you're sayin.


Chris Brown's verse
yeah, my female friend always singin this song and shit and be dancin on me all the time. I dont mind the dancin, but she keeps this shit on REPEAT, nigga. I learned the words without even tryin.
But it IS kinda catchy for dude to be 16.

Juelz Santana part
my favorite part of the song. cos Im a mothafuckin dipset fan.
make it drop honey, make it pop honey
whip whop tick tock to the clock for me

doope.

so, overall, its a fairly decent track. besides your vocals soundin kinda smothered, I still enjoyed Juelz part.
its all good, nothin but love.
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