beat - Perseverance is always tight with beats. i jus hate his little whisper thing he does

concept -this is a good idea. i like the way you approached it

hook - simple but good. you get the point across.

lyrics - lyrics weren't bad at all. this was actually pretty good.

flow was good. some multies i heard that made it flow a lot more smooth. mic prescence was good. emotion definitely fit the track well. the only thing i can kinda complain about is the fact that the vocals were a little too high. could barely hear the beat.


good track man. we gotta get one going