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Old 11-10-05, 03:23 PM   #7
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Voted For: Daubs

Snap Daubs like corn cobs,... break him off like the Kernel...
Twist his shit around like door knobs send him asleep for internal...
2..ok,so you'll twist him around and send him to sleep..no punch in here.
Its your funeral, your personals are all based on false facts...
Scared to battle me, called him out N rapidly his pulse reacts...
3...No,could have been something good if you used it right.
Standin still tryin to ignore it Daubs looks like a rappin statue...
It happens when you spit No Boos cuz the crowd is clappin at you...
5....ok...
You try to get better step by step but like a ladder fall back...
Whats sadder you call it rap,but matter of fact it aint all that...
4....too generic.
E.C.+Daubs runnin around like 2Losers wit it painted on there head...*
Crew wasnt gettin' respect threw raps, so they just hated instead...
3...again,generic punch and 1st line is played as relating Living Legends with 2 L's/losses had been done a lot.
My lyrics cut up your pre-writes like I had a pair of sizzors kid...
Its hard to see Daubs with skill like he was rappin' in a blizzard...
3....didn't rhyme,as you had the "kid" part in the 1st line which fucked shit up;punch could have been something with wording.
Your elevation stays low like a lizzard with the whack stuff u say...
In this battle, Daubs walks in... and gets served like a buffet...
3...played.
Rhymes keep fallin' off like a toupee, your only rated 3-Stars...*
Crashin' your car into a pole is the only time you drop solid bars...
4...decent punch;but in the 1st line...ripping on sigs is gay.
Daubs is always havin' his 'spits out' like a pack of chewin' gum...
This junkies rhymes really 'blow' like this whacko was doin' some...
3...again,played...both lines.
Kids punches dont make a loud bang, like lightnin' without thunder...
Your record stays under,cuz you got E.C. ghost-writtin' no wonder...
7...your best punch.

Winter battle? nope, maybe you can fool RV, but me I know
season, while im keyin my punches...
...you th' autumn at least a week ago
6...good.
Met M.Jackson and loved it, said you never shaken a better hand
cause your punches relate to his theme park...G they neverland
6....cool.
He struggles to keep his girl satisfied, his sex lifes a doubt
cause this bitch used all the balls he got in calling me out
7...nice.
Your face is spotted,yellow and huge...kinda like ya mouth is
so he's quick to clearasil...
...and i dont mean robbin houses
5...decent.
You'd fail as a secetary, or any job...even you know this
cause it took you more than 40 wins to even get noticed
8...nice personal
matta fact your still unkwnown..you aint discover this yet
So when i say ima killAZ...i dont mean murdering the alphabet.
6..yea..another good one
So you refering to me as a child, im sure im older than you
cos ya thought ya grew a dick..then realised it wer just a pube
4..a dick line.?..meh,it's ok..nothing like the others.
canada weak shit what you got,i aint talking where your from
cos the last decent person with 14 losses...
...wait there never was one
4...meh,there are a lot of people on this site that are good with 14 losses(and I ain't talking about myself..LoL..I mean other people)
You can beat a lotta people, maybe africa two, but nothin more
So il show you ajar of talent...then kick you through the door
4...bah,weak
See fag, i told you had a chance...but it was just a metaphor
but still you picked up the pencil...
...and tried to draw the smallest straw
6..good closer.

Ok..this shit was one-sided..
Daubs bassically owned the fuck outta Gkillaz in this,honestly.

Gkillaz..I think your too generic with your punches.For some reason,a lot of your lines just gave me that "So what?" feeling.I'm guessing that it's your wording.You also had an abundance of played lines.Like the ones about his crew,chewing gum,buffet,and a line about his sig..ya know..

So..yea..

Vote-Daubs

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