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Take a Glimpse at the Sun
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11-10-05, 03:48 PM
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Daubs
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Rhymeing in some places was kind of basic but still got the point across, flow was better later on in the piece, solid imagery throughout and had a complex inner scheme to me...
closeing part was cool to.
Decent mate.
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