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This was feedback posted for Illist
IP:
Whatt up? This is how I think it wen't down...
ThatNigga-
This dick riding faggot is fuckin stressing me like whoa
He hangin off tha tip of my dick and he wont let go
^^^^Played out in my opinion, it was decent.
Couldn’t pull a bitch if wanted, this niggaz scared of the clit
You could call him chuck, cuz u know u quick 2 get sticked*
^^^^First line played in my opinion, chuck line was decent
Ill blast this nigga wit 1 clip dropping mad bricks he wont get up this time
Im gon leave this dirty mutha fucka missin thas why they call it victimless crime
^^^^^These lines were too long, second line was good
“Illist” what an original name dawg, theres no one else like you
ill rip yo ass 2 shreds, and anyone else that got a problem despite who
^^^^^Lines kinda long once again, b oth lines were coo'
overall ThatNigga, in my opinion you should work on originality, punches, and structure more..it helps homie
overall-6/10
Illest-
I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla'
use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record..
.............and beat the pro portion outta ya
^^^^^Nice opener.. structure kinda weird
Big lip bandit. ya funny but only looks are to me..
..shit, we have the real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe.
^^^^Lol real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe..
It's clear you're an herb.. this kids frikin' lame..
..I didn't even have to peep a verse.
..I figured that out by your sig n username!
^^^^^Nice wording and punch..weird structure once again
punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation-
It's a parent ya wack...
.... like havin' kids from masturbation..
^^^^^LOL at masturbation line..weird structure
overall-Structure was kinda different but the verse was overall nice with v ocab, wording, punches..
vote-Illest because his punches and wordplay was more effective towards ThatNigga in my opinion..Nice job niggas..
~1~
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We scream "Please.....So what?"....
The streets molded us, we've seen the feinds throw up.
yuck........-Grafh
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