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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
From: ATL..still reppin' NYC |
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IP:
i already gave feed on aim but yeah...
you getting better man... lower ya vocals and mix down ya tracks... it sounds like ya just spit and left it... lyrics are coming along... reading them was helpful... 2nd verse definitely better than the first... hook was ok... jumbled at first.... i told ya be4 that ya free's sound better than ya writtens cuz ya flow so much better... keep practicing man...
decent drop... just practice whenever you can
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CLICK DA SIGGY
"real recognize real but still others remain jaded
believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it
there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated:
wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it" |