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E.C-

is he beating me? with lines like his, i highley doubt he's mighty
coz your structure's fucked, so stay on point...
...n keep ya verses Tie-D,
^^^^Alright beginning, structure was strange

i'll write it quicker than ever for this, tie-d's known for stopping crews,
not coz he's dope... but becuz no crew wants to be rocking you,*
^^^^^Nice wordplay in second line..decent punch

ill leave you frailed bitch... slice ya neck, so you can be bloody rough,
i'd ask you to join the legends, but i know your knot good enough,
^^^^Lines were long, decent punch in second line

your as boring as ya profile man, now.. i'm stripping him bare,
coz ill Tie-D to a rope...
...and then kick away the chair,
^^^^weird structure, nice personal in first line, decent punch in second line

you want respect on this site? u need some skill to lift off shit,
coz if you keep droppin wack shit, ya gonna get kicked off it,
^^^^decent wording, okay punch in second line

overall-Structure was weird, punches coulda been more effective

Tie-D
This kid’s seat at school is by the wall for playing the fool
His crew insist their leaders not a toy
………………………….. playing like that’s just cruel
^^^^Weird structure, long line..didnt get punch

Now iv spat on it, I can go into a wet hole
EC knows all about that
………………..oh yeah, cos he “gets told”
^^^^Weird structure, punch was okay

Ya audios stink so bad, I wish I never heard you
Sounded like a dying giraffe wiv a bad case of bird flu.
^^^^^Probably nicest punch, but didnt make sense..a giraffe getting bird flu?

Rite you dumb fuck the funs up you’ve come un-stuck
To sum up.
......................you’ll only ever come up in a bum-fuck
^^^^^Weird structure, played out gay line, okay punch

overall-Need to work on originality, punches and wording basically

vote-E.C because his punches, wording and originality was a little stronger but not by much, nice try fellas and props..
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