lmao intro is madd funny..

1st verse-
pretty nice trip
flow is coo, your emotion and delivery is right on point
im liking the lyrics, pretty deep shit
something about this verse that sounds to "whisper-ish" to me though
maybe its the way you mixed it? or the effects added to your voice
i dont think it suit the track really, you fixed it in the 3rd verse

2nd-
ike good stuff
im def liking your flow, prolly my favorite part of the track
delivery is right there, you always kill the real deep emotional type tracks, they definetly fit your style
lyrics accompany the delivery shits deep, i liked it

3rd verse-
trip much better with the emotion/delivery here
as i said earlier i thought the 1st verse was a lil too whisper ish
i liked how this verse seem to be a lil more intense, a lil more emotion in there
your flow fell off a tad with some of your lyrics
it seemed like you tried to pack a few too many words into some lines
but other than that it was fine
lyrics was nice throughout the track

overall some solid stuff
i wasnt a fan of the beat really, but thats just me
you two work well together, good shit.

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