word, ive seen quite a bit of elevatioin in just today..thats dope
i do like the text, but make sure you dont follow the trend of a lot of the newer gfx heads and play out their techniques..

its real dissappointing to see someone play their style out in just a couple sigs, so im really hoping you dont do that since your on the right track now..
in the future, just mix it up a bit more, try new things
it worked for you at least one time with the text, theres nothing that says it cant happen again...nah mean?

so word, lens flare in the back is a tad bit random
i dont know if you purposely faded the backround out to draw attention to the text...if you did that was real artistic, something id like to see more of in peoples work

but word man, keep this shit up...you def on right track.

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