Voted For: .Compulsive.

I'll tear through your lines like playin dot to dot with a knife
Over your spinal cord, it's like they pay to fuck your rhymes, this nigga's
Lines are whored,
kinda strectched....not real good structure here
drop a rhyme, I'm bored, flows like Scratched math CDs i've heard this niggas shit "times" before
aight...i like that
This hoe's flow's basic, average joe's prose's wasted
Nigga i can't spell your name without a "LOSE" face it.....
forced...

breakdown-your verse was aight...your structure had me all over the place so it wasn't an easy read...battles you should be tryin to get straight to the point with punches and personals.... 3/10

Exausted with words when i demolish his field like impulsive Mental Institues,
Never earning compliments, rhymings poor like " Save The Kids Tributes"
haha...ok
An explosin to your record when we cross paths no one can feel your raft,
Mentally Ill constantly repeating the same lines like PsychoPaths,
ok
Pay Pals his bars from ebay just to make a 10 line verse,
straight punching this clown leavin him with more colors then Starburts,
eh...ok
Gutting this Dickless bitch with priceless lines, strangle you with ya own embilicle cord,
I'd dismantle you in seconds if i was being serious... your lucky im bored,
um....ok
Im the war lord of rap, the king of the hill, your gonna get whored,
watch as the crowd claps, I count my earnings, then dice ya head with a sword,
ok...not really hittin



breakdown-your verse had a lot of more punches that were hittin in it...saw a couple personals in there....your punches were ok but you need ot just work on the delievery of them...and also work on that flow...nice verse overall....... 5/10

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