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Old 11-11-05, 01:29 PM   #10
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Voted For: Daubs

Winter battle? nope, maybe you can fool RV, but me I know
season, while im keyin my punches...
...you th' autumn at least a week ago
^^dope, was feelin the wordplay, well done
Met M.Jackson and loved it, said you never shaken a better hand
cause your punches relate to his theme park...G they neverland
^^shouldnt've used this.... never..ever again fam...bad..lol
He struggles to keep his girl satisfied, his sex lifes a doubt
cause this bitch used all the balls he got in calling me out
^^lol, ok.....
Your face is spotted,yellow and huge...kinda like ya mouth is
so he's quick to clearasil...
...and i dont mean robbin houses
^^pronounced different in the uk to here, but i got it..decent
You'd fail as a secetary, or any job...even you know this
cause it took you more than 40 wins to even get noticed
^^eh,.....basic n weak
matta fact your still unkwnown..you aint discover this yet
So when i say ima killAZ...i dont mean murdering the alphabet.
^^nope, its good but ive seen it before in "li vs spul"

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Originally Posted by GKillaz05
Lets go kid, you think your all that


So you refering to me as a child, im sure im older than you
cos ya thought ya grew a dick..then realised it wer just a pube
^^seen it before... n heard it b4.... just to played
canada weak shit what you got,i aint talking where your from
cos the last decent person with 14 losses...
...wait there never was one
^^good flip
You can beat a lotta people, maybe africa two, but nothin more
So il show you ajar of talent...then kick you through the door
^^lmao, i liked this....good shit
See fag, i told you had a chance...but it was just a metaphor
but still you picked up the pencil...
...and tried to draw the smallest straw
i liked the concept but delivery was ass......bad closing
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daubs overall you had the better verse just from creativity
n proper usage of similies/metas/wording...
some hard hitting punches that imo were top notch....
good battle.....
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Snap Daubs like corn cobs,... break him off like the Kernel...
Twist his shit around like door knobs send him asleep for internal...
^^opener was rather weak bro
Its your funeral, your personals are all based on false facts...
Scared to battle me, called him out N rapidly his pulse reacts...
^^wasnt feelin this much
Standin still tryin to ignore it Daubs looks like a rappin statue...
It happens when you spit No Boos cuz the crowd is clappin at you...
^^^decent, ok gunplay i guess
You try to get better step by step but like a ladder fall back...
Whats sadder you call it rap,but matter of fact it aint all that...
^^concept couldve been delivered better
E.C.+Daubs runnin around like 2Losers wit it painted on there head...*
Crew wasnt gettin' respect threw raps, so they just hated instead...
^^lol,...funny but simple
My lyrics cut up your pre-writes like I had a pair of sizzors kid...
Its hard to see Daubs with skill like he was rappin' in a blizzard...
^^ok meta......
Your elevation stays low like a lizzard with the whack stuff u say...
In this battle, Daubs walks in... and gets served like a buffet...
^^way to simple yo
Rhymes keep fallin' off like a toupee, your only rated 3-Stars...*
Crashin' your car into a pole is the only time you drop solid bars...
^^ok, but it wasnt great
Daubs is always havin' his 'spits out' like a pack of chewin' gum...
This junkies rhymes really 'blow' like this whacko was doin' some...
^^lol,..ok,,, made me laugh
Kids punches dont make a loud bang, like lightnin' without thunder...
Your record stays under,cuz you got E.C. ghost-writtin' no wonder...
^^imo i thought ya closer was rather weak as was your opener
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the majority of your verse was simplistic, decent text flow
but your punches were at best boarderline creative..
it just seems as thou you didnt put much effort into your verse....no hate bro.... it just wasnt a hard hitting verse.
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!