Voted For: Natural killa

first off, i expected more from both...its close so
im gonna actually rate each bar......
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Minds are teared if they think fraud's winning this shit,cuz that's kinda rare,
I mean,c'mon..it'd only make about as much sence...as that line up there,
^^decent, but thats been used on him b4 4/10
Your shit is sooo fucking wack,your giving this whole site a big laugh,and,
Only people that can't pronounce MarvenJay's name...........are afgans,
^^nah..wasnt feelin it 1/10
A half man?..nah,you a full bitch..all the manhood in ya' head is all lies,no truth,
Cuz half of the site don't even know you..and the other half is just despising you,
^^blah, rather weak man 4/10
So Fraud,realize the truth,your too wack in P.L.L,just a big pain 'n shit,
And to add insult to injury...............you went placed two of your names in it,
^^ok personal 6/10
It must pain ya',bitch..cuz your nothing,just a waste of life,left rotting,
You've beaten nobody with skill..so what makes YOU think you've got it?,
^^ok, not a real personal thou....4/10
Think about it,ya' repetiore's limited as fuck..you got nothing hot to bring,
And you know..what the fuck u doin' in EFL.......YOU'VE ONLY GOT 2 WINS!!,
^^eh, really not a strong closer..4/10
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.23/60
overall your verse wasnt that bad, not great either but
you concepts boarder simplistic wit, imo your verse is choppy
n fragmented like your strugglin to complete your bar by using
any words available from your vocabulary...
ease up on the length of your lines by a couple syllables n
your verse wouldnt seem so fragmented with fillers.
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u got the wrong impression of fraud, get a better first look
stomp u w/ my other shoe cuz we started off on the wrong Foot
^^eh, seen much better flips of this concept 3/10
u smokin dirtweed...I'll 'ring' ya scrawny neck cuz im a 'buzz'kill
N.K scared, doin' more 'runnin' then drug smugglers from Brazil
^^just wack...1/10
he cant write 'free'hand...one's pickin da nose the others beatin hes-dick
i'd love to walk all over you but i cant stand steppin' in Dogshit
^^nice...6/10
You more 'blown out of proportion' than da rumor w/ Jay-Z & Free
Either your one of the most washed up vets or maybe it's just me?
^^nope,lacked a punch in the bar..0/10
fraud here and my talent beyond you, my skills relate to a psyco savage
eat out ya heart-disreguard ya flesh-and leave ya bones in a loose bagage
^^why is this here? its wack...0/10
i've seen your battles and it looks like you've been taken to hell
the only thing longer than your bars is your colum of "L's"
^^good concept but his l's colum has no length
i kno what you meant but it was badly delivered....very badly 1/10

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.11/60
horrible verse.....nk would've had to have been blind n retarded to lose this match to the verse you wrote n posted..
ultimately, work on your punches n dont use bars of complete fillers in battle verses..
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no hate

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!