okay using the devise beat...old devise at that.....man quality is terrible...alot of pops an the sound is muffled......ok flow isn't to good....your hitting the snares but your completely off rhythm...ya flow is very rigid....smoothe it out by fully pronouncing words an using better transition words....delivery wasn't really full of emotion it sounds like u was jus raising ya tone...u dun wanna sustain the same tone u want ya tone to change up every line.....hook was decent...overall u really need better mixing bad...however you have def improved greatly...stay up......1

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