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Old 11-11-05, 05:57 PM   #5
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I wear bling with nice gleam so bring the ice cream dang
You soft like dairy Queen but I’m very mean and speak slang

what does bling have to do with robby mcallister?
what does ice cream have to do with anything?
your mean and speak slang? again...in a diss..you don't talk about yourself..you talk about the person your dissing...

Mccallister you have zero rhythm and no heroism you whack
A true fact why your crew act and flow silly with no ability intact?

how would you know if he had no rhythm..you havn't listened to him...and you called him whack..so atleast your actually starting to diss him...but everybodies said that to eachother..so thats lame as hell
...do you even know anybody in his crew? i don't think so

You write sloppy copies and like jalopies rhymes don’t bring a good price
You not hood nice your art is absurd and should be parked on the curb

sloppy copies would have been decent if you talked about him biting....but you didn;t...you talked about a fuckin jalopi..thats retarded...who cares if he's hood nice or not? that doesn't determine his ability

Let the cops ticket it that’s some wicked shit should be hall off as words
Of trash, I’m on the brink of success but you a stink mess only nerds

this was just awful

Like your rhymes your type should resign or be banned you heard?
Fronting with script on a hunting trip a prankster can’t shoot anything
In the hood bold with rhymes as good as gold you should fold and cling

again...awful

To this because you can’t hold Hip Hop true not the tip top of the crew
Your braids fake plus your train is late so you missed the parade

crew doesn't rhyme with the line before..or after...what the fuck man
he doesn't have braids? and who takes a train to a parade? and what parade are you talking about? i've told you again and again...the shit you spit is a bunch of nonsense..this proves it

Best twist your braids with beeswax you not hot and brisk just afraid
Your voice a belligerent tone you not equivalent in dome your serenade

lmao...he doesn't have braids...and did you really say beeswax? hahaha...the second line doesn't even make sense...in dome your serenade? what the fuck dude

Wackiness with guitar not a legit star you don’t sing well at all
You give slop direction fill with objections like courtrooms in municipal hall

okay....this is the best line you had by fuckin far...it still wasn't that good..but this is the closest i've seen you come to understanding what a diss really is

Just a fake troop and like Campbell you try make soup look I intimidate
By blinding and eliminate by rhyming stupidity is all you demonstrate


he tries to make soup? what the fuck does that mean? awful...again
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