*listening*
I ilke how you came in.....shit's pretty tight. You flow pretty well. You probably got one of the best flows on this site.....honestly. I don't know why you're getting slept on. Your chorus needs work. The concept is good and so are the lyrics, but the actual quality of the chorus is ass. The volume needs to be raised on your chorus's vocals as well. This is a good song though, I'm feeling it. We need to get together on a track for real
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