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Old 11-12-05, 08:14 AM   #18
C-Hood
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Voted For: Technique

Technique be meek cuz I said it b4
Ur weak skills give no thrills
Ill lock u up in Ur minds methodical drawer
Ur speech freakish not sleek enough to feel this
So let’s settle the score
this stucture is horrible...not a very good punch either
Im calling u out bout to let it loose
Up against a chump like U they say “Poetics - what’s the use”
hell naw
Buts it’s the battle I chose, one u know Ur gonna lose
Comin up against me…meng ur a fool
hell naw
Ill keep this short cuz u ain’t even @ my level
One luv 4 da real Cat’s that read this & imagine the bass N treble
what the fuck?!?!


breakdown-well young man i see that you are extremly new to the rap tip...in battles you must incorporate punches and personals...you had NONE of these so there fore your verse sucked more than 2 dolla hoes...and your structure i don't even want to touch on that...but i will....what the hell were you thinkin? i couldn't really read it...flow was off like a motherfucka...this shit was just fucked up....take my advice and sit back and watch some of these other cats on here and learn!!
overal- -5/10






Technique
this faggot wanted me to battle so it had to be accepted
Now watch this fool get dicected and leave the battle rejected
ok
Fuck your not respected cuz ya lame disses are like kinder garden
Your to off guarded and only wanna battle me 2 get a hard on
can't see the rhyme
I took a look at your diss which was like a child had wrote it
Your punchlines are played n gay just sit back and choke kid
ok
While I smack you viciously that'll put your ass in differen't dimentions
Pay attention to me go fuck yourself take this beating as a lesson
ok
dunno why the fuck your here cuz your not elevated
This bitch is hated even girls hate to date him
If you ask me I think you should dissapear
cuz your a phony emcee that nobody wanna hear
ok


breakdown-your verse wasn't all that good either but trust me it was enough to herb this guy...you need to just work on your punches and personals...i hope that you was just takin it light cuz you already seen what this guy can do or somethin...but aight that's it


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