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Old 11-12-05, 01:41 PM   #24
Ryan Hughes
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Voted For: GKillaz05

Talk shyt, its a wrap cuz da six'll pop ya,
sit back n watch him 'choke' like the 'knickerboccers',
^^^naw that was weak
u aint a killa 'poppa', i chill while u ack hard,
put ya name on ma list, n put a grave in ma backyard,
^^^no punch
go n grab a gun, n tell da neighbors ya paths marked,
u lack smarts , he's a faggot n a fuckin wimp,
^^^shit didnt rhyme
if g's such a killa, someone tell me why's he duckin mims?,
read him a bed time story before u tuck him in,
^^NO
nigga i buck i win, n ya 'dream is through',
every one of ma 'bars' is 'nuts' like a 'peanut chew',
^^^No self glory
on a regular basis i'd shock u like a pikachu,
but on dis ossasion i'll just let the nina scream at u,
^^^ight closer

Your rhymes need surgery your purgery is not workin'...
Could give you 10 free shots punches still aint hurtin'...
^^^ight nuthin to good
I'll spit first even though you'll try to copy my shit...
Thats why when im done spittin' ima copywrite my spit...
^^^^Good
You could rap featurin Missy and still couldnt work it...
Practice makes perfect Fatal come up short like a circuit...
^^^NO
Kid head like a computer with a fatal error inside...
Tried flowin' down a slide, and just ran off the side...
^^^This was weak
Kids terrorfied to go outside, thats why he on the comp...
Stompin' all over you, while you just reak like a swamp...
^^^This was weak
Puttin'a red light on ya streak I hold it up like taffic...
Ask Whats whack ya track is, man just stick to graphics...
^^^Good....
Smack this herb, thx for the goodluck but Im conceded...
Pothead just proceeded to get the L like he needed it...
^^^ight Pretty played
Fatal still not dope... killin' ya breathe like scope...
Scientist study'n ya rap cant see skill unda a microscope...
^^^Not bad closer

V/Gkillaz05 he came wit a solid verse that was consistent an got the win......
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