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Old 11-12-05, 04:13 PM   #5
~Lady Fiya~
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aight welcome back, youngin

Black Magik - nice verse, i like your presence and confidence is hot... lyrics pretty decent, you ownin this beat

Vendetta - the best I ever heard from you but then again I haven't heard tracks from you in a bit, your flow is decent.. your lyrics straight but your presence and delivery is lackin

Young Montana - this seems like the beat itself was a bit of a challenge for you, seems like you coulda came a lil betta on your verse, not necessarily lyrically but delivery-wise and flow wise

Chorus - Pretty straight, the beat omg I want it!

Not bad fellas at all... good to hear from y'all again.
Stay up, just fix the minor probs. then it was sound much better, ya feel
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