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Old 11-13-05, 02:54 PM   #29
Jae Gutta
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You know what I feel about the joint - the hook is dope.. verses are cool but the hook is the strong part of the song. Flow and all your mechanics were good, but you need to work on delivery and strengthen that aspect of your rhyme game. other than that, no complaints.. good job
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