Voted For: Cdusit
Ok leme do my breakdown..
S.S.- You seemed like you were just using irrelevant similies.
Like the "you're trying to catch up like a bunch of fed". Now I'm looking at this and you sort of have a style like nas. But it doesnt work in the battle area. And your closer wasn't all that hot either. You're getting there, just fix the flow and work your punches a bit better.
Cdusit.
aight now I saw alot of personals in here. Flow was streched.
The opener was somewhat funny, but my favorite lines were:
I havent written generic wack punches for a fucking while
mainly because i dont want to bite Street Scripture's style
and
Id say somthing funny, he replies with "but"......reinforcing his position**
asked him to battle......fag needed an hour to make a decision
The flow was still streched, but eh its text. Over all you had more hard hitting punches so you win.
V/C buscuit.