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Old 11-13-05, 04:08 PM   #9
Indeph
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Voted For: Cdusit

Ok leme do my breakdown..

S.S.- You seemed like you were just using irrelevant similies.
Like the "you're trying to catch up like a bunch of fed". Now I'm looking at this and you sort of have a style like nas. But it doesnt work in the battle area. And your closer wasn't all that hot either. You're getting there, just fix the flow and work your punches a bit better.

Cdusit.
aight now I saw alot of personals in here. Flow was streched.
The opener was somewhat funny, but my favorite lines were:

I havent written generic wack punches for a fucking while
mainly because i dont want to bite Street Scripture's style

and

Id say somthing funny, he replies with "but"......reinforcing his position**
asked him to battle......fag needed an hour to make a decision

The flow was still streched, but eh its text. Over all you had more hard hitting punches so you win.

V/C buscuit.