Voted For: Cdusit

This was a pretty one-sided battle Cdusit took this.

Street Scripture:
Check it, he crossin my territory so now I gotta rip this nigga into shreds
The tip of my pencil killin him lyrically, like I'm usin some gun lead
Naw, weak opener
He ain't ready for me, his raps to pre-mature it's in the stages of wettin the bed
My shit notorious like B.I.G., he tryin to catch up like a bunch of feds
Nope..Weak
He's just another white boy, an mc wannabe who tryin to be like the stars
But it's takin him 15 minutes just to think up one whole bar
Decent
Cus my punches crossin over like ghosts doin 187 like they inside of a car
Where does this go?3 line bar?

Overall pretty weak drop..had no real punchlines nothing really hit hard.. elevate learn to make personals and punchlines going to your opponent not random stuff.

Cdusit
kids facing a lost cause like the never ending story..theres no end in sight
he a confused protester..I told him not to bite he yelled " I defend my right"
Decent opener
Id say somthing funny, he replies with "but"......reinforcing his position**
asked him to battle......fag needed an hour to make a decision
Okay..could have been alot better
I havent written generic wack punches for a fucking while
mainly because i dont want to bite Street Scripture's style
Decent
moments have past so i was going to use this line as a filler
but kids getting rapped in this battle...and im not refering to the star of thriller****
Naw
I guess i shouldnt be so hard and end this on a freindly note
but Street Scripture reminds me of broke resturant customers....
........cant pay so he pretend he choked!!!!
Lol..decent closer

Overall pretty one-sided battle and my vote goes to Cdusit

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