Voted For: Daubs
oreo the wizard of oz, daubs he tin-man he needs heart
put your brain on the road so you can get street smart
bad wording, rhymes dont need to be exact (so u coulda ended wit street smartS instead) decent concept
couldnt spit flames so the raps he spit cant burn apart
daubs couldnt explode on a track if he was dale earnhart
bad setup, good punch (rip dale earnhart
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i knock grouppie hoes while you sit back and deal with foes
deepest you ever been in the streets was sitting in pot holes
nice punch, i aint feelin the whole "u aint gangsta" approach, but u still had good wordplay
you walk around wearing more crosses then vampire slayers
and love to do more tricks with your "balls" then and 1 players
really badly worded, not too good of a punch either
on the corner all day and you still a broke joke of a hustler
r.v. could rent movies from Daubs, hes a true block buster
isnt blockbuster a compliment? i think u were trying to make it a follow-up to ur first line, but it didnt come out very well
daubs:
ts no suprise he gets slept on, in the business of catering
Cos he wont oreop(hurryup) and elevate,we're tired of waiting
where'd the caterin line come from?
n the oreop thing WAS nameplay, but u need to remember to make the name part of the punch, just sayin his name isnt a diss
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Im bad n your dope, na its just that your dope is my bad
But oreos punches are red raw.....when he dye's hands
punch is ight, dont like the setup
Oreo's unedible....Yeah, Cookies get ate..not blow jobs
N he aint bien praised when he steps on the stage & the show stops
not too god, needs more of a punch
Even if my punches miss, they still explosive...like i landmine
but your watch is over your fists...like ya punches are behind time
lol u worded it wrong, shoulda been "cuz" instead of "like or suttin like that"
Like overdosers,ima leave this wackness destroyed with ease
And its only the druggies of RapVerse...that enjoy t'cook-E's
your punches are too complicated, n dont hit very hard, wordplay isnt everythin
Oreo's all talk,he just wont do it like nike immitations
And he blamed record lows on his CD sales on diskriminations
lmao, great setup
Your fully beat, like playing completed instrumentals
But the only thing you spit outa ya mouth is ya dentals
another good punch
When RV shouts O'shit...there laughin at you not with you
And he thought the onlyway to take out dubs..was reducin the volume
ok punch, but it doesnt really rhyme
When i say he's diss=played,im not talkin about fixin the net
And he's longing for the Win....and still hasnt reached a vet
not much of a punch, again too much wordplay
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He the only person to crash partys...before they even started
And Oreo's aren't clubs......but still his skills have partied (clubs are a biscuit too)
not a good closer, setup wasnt really a punch
[b]overall
neither verse was great, but daubs stayed fairly consistent (no horrible lines) in a long verse, and oreo didnt stay consistent in a short verse
oreo had the best punches, but his verse really fell apart at the end
v/daubs